Date of publication: 2017-09-02 18:51
Also there was scope for discussing decentralization of HES, and making it more inclusive. Taking HES to rural areas is one area where government should think loud.
Technology by itself cannot solve our environmental problems. First of all, it is neutral , neither good nor bad: Only the user can decide how it is to be used. Secondly, it is difficult to imagine in advance how new technology can be used, or misused. For example, if we learned how to produce endless cheap energy , would the results be necessarily all good? A third point is that technology generally belongs, at least at the beginning, to the rich and powerful , who use it for their own ends.
Sorry, I believe that your position is not clear. I finished reading without knowing if you agree or disagree.
Moreover, the Amazon example is not negating the thesis: Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. This is because those tribes have not adopted technology!!!! How can this be an example for the other POV? The other POV will be supported by an example of people who have embraced technology but kept their traditions, such as the African tribes you mentioned.
Does capital punishment deter It does not. The example of of a six year old victim the day after Criminal Amendment Act 7568, which provides for capital punishment in cases of was passed indicates to this fact. Instead, it makes the perpetrator more aware of the fact that he may get capital punishment if he is caught and the incentive to leave the victim unharmed is taken out of the equation.
Having done all of that, the final element – and final sentence in your essay – should be a "global statement" or "call to action" that gives the reader signals that the discussion has come to an end.
As per the dictionary meaning of paradox 8775 self-contradictory statement that is actually true 8776 , i am not able to find even a single paradox.
Regionalism is also being practiced. In Maharastra and Kerla workers from Bihar, UP and Orissa have been segregated and beaten to death on live camera by worker of political parties. Putting their state or region first before the nation is a serious threat to the unity and integrity of our country.
While, it would be best if the democratic power structures themselves work to create a society that promotes democracy and ensures its proper functioning, real world is rarely utopian. It therefore falls on the shoulders of the social movement to complete the job that democracy has left incomplete. Revolutions might provide a temporary respite and may pave the conditions for strengthening of the social movements, but eventually it is the evolutionary change brought about by social movements that can crystallize and give a robust, flexible and tolerant society in which the ethos of democracy can be rooted, not only in letter but also in spirit!
You have to realise that an IELTS essay is written in 95 minutes with no access to research. There is no expectation that an essay will be absolutely perfect.
Thanks Aditya i have hinted at the paradoxes in most of the points.. but i think i needed to be more explicit.. i will keep ur views in my mind next time.
Transitional phrases are useful for showing the reader where one section ends and another begins. It may be helpful to see them as the written equivalent of the kinds of spoken cues used in formal speeches that signal the end of one set of ideas and the beginning of another. In essence, they lead the reader from one section of the paragraph of another.
A healthy body is home to a healthy mind. It can be easily seen among the developed nations. The health parameters in these countries are much better than the developing countries. The percentage of students going to colleges is much more in developed countries than in developing countries. Better health will decrease resources on medical facilities thereby freeing resources for educational and economic development.
You will get 8 hours time in the exam. It is enough to write good two essays! So take 85-95 minutes to brainstorm ideas, concepts and structure. If you have real stuff, write a lengthy essay, if you are short of ideas, write a small one. There is no prescribed word limit for Essay paper.